I'm not liking the shoes either, I think some red patent ballets would look really nice ( know you're not a fan of flats but with this look I definately think you should reassess the flat shoe situ!)
Your top is too small. It is rising up in the back. The length should allow the back & front to drape evenly. The cuffs are too wide, also. I agree that the shoes are too bulky & clunky.