The curls look fine, as do the straight parts, but they just don't mesh well. It just looks odd to see super straight bangs & curly sides. If you pinned the straight parts, so it looked like you had curls but pulled some tight, that would look more natura
Really cute! Next time, try to wrap your hair as close to the root at possible because one side's curls start closer than the other. But the curls are great!
Another really good way is to cut a towel into strips thick or thin and wrap slightly dampened hair around and tie all your hair up section by section and the curls come out amazing :) YOUR HAIR LOOKS GREAT BTW!