I really love the harsh colors on your skin because the contrast is beautiful, but for an everyday look, don't be afraid to go a little more natural on the eyes. Just eyeliner on top and mascara on top and bottom would look amazing.
This is a pretty severe look. The hard line of the bangs, & dark eyebrows are both strong on such light skin. I'd tone down the eye makeup. You don't need it, & it's just another hard black line on your face. Less is more at your age, so go easy.